I'm really glad you're feeling inspired, and I find it beautiful, your nik name. Feel free to express yourself my friend, because the emotions are always beautiful shared. These characters have left an indelible mark on me that I will never forget. There are models to follow in my life .... aahahhaha ... well soon.
I'm not pointing this out as a flaw in no way cause this is epic, but is Kaidans six pack damaged?? Read the fabric and reading that he gets thrown about quite a bit, was wondering if that's something that happened to him. Its not a flaw as I've said but it seems to fit in well with the fabric. Great piece here.